Evaluation~college magazine~

This is the complete cover and contents page of the college magazine.

I think this is not adapt my flat plans because I did not have time to make it and also I did not know how to design further. So I will evaluate what wrong it is and what I have to do to make better.

First, this cover. The photograph is very good but the background is not good, because this is the wall and it is not delightful background. If this cover is delightful and soft, the background is more colorful or white. Likewise, the background of the subtitle is different of my idea, and the letters are not attractive and a glorious design. I had to think what person should wear and what the color of fonts must change. Also I think the title is not unique and it is so small. It is better to design bigger.

Second, this contents page. I think this idea is not bad because this pair of the color is so nice, and the font of "contents" is cool. Also the picture that is off shot is so good.If I am reader of this magazine, the off shot of the model makes me to feel close, because the face of off shot is the real face of that person and reader prefer seeing the picture like this.

Overall. this magazine has a lot of point which were able to be better if i could change. So next magazine, I will think and about target audience whom I should to be wanting to read and buy.