Feedback

To begin with, I showed it my friends, who are my target audience. They also said, “Cool!!” They gave me some advices, that the cover page used too much white, around the title, too. I was noticed that title is the most impact things when publishing the magazine. It makes a different between other magazines. Therefore, for reader, it becomes much easier to find it. But this magazine, there is a lack of impact of magazine, because of using only black and no effects. Speaking of effects, they also advised that in contents page, I had better to be the letters “Content” smaller, because it has no meaning, just showing as contents page.

I also showed it my parents as the other generation, they told that they are good, especially contents page, but they are used the same color, which makes more boring. For example, all pages use the black and white gradations. I thought that made simple and cool, but I leant to use and design more colorful. Using many colors on rock music magazine is a little different, but only a few colors are not good, either.